tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post8579165378689535599..comments2023-04-05T05:09:20.944-04:00Comments on Lilly Gayle- Author of paranormal and historical romance.: The Significance of First LinesLilly Gaylehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12085355337721818824noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-31603669559241308072011-02-04T11:15:24.405-05:002011-02-04T11:15:24.405-05:00"Strip his shirt off." has me hooked! Li..."Strip his shirt off." has me hooked! Lilly your comment is very true. What's on the inside is more important, but it's nice to have "eye candy".rbooth43https://www.blogger.com/profile/13397822821356862700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-60058564688906244302011-02-03T11:41:23.913-05:002011-02-03T11:41:23.913-05:00Hi Stephanie! Hm...a lot of likes for the faerie l...Hi Stephanie! Hm...a lot of likes for the faerie line...Note to self: finish my fantasy novel...! :)Kat Duncanhttp://www.katduncan.net/writeabout/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-73282646294275689502011-02-02T22:22:09.206-05:002011-02-02T22:22:09.206-05:00I would love to, Lilly! You just let me know what ...I would love to, Lilly! You just let me know what you want & when you want it. lol. :)Cherokee Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794636808277697930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-14545575518897555452011-02-02T20:18:24.150-05:002011-02-02T20:18:24.150-05:00I like the faerie line.
Stephanie Suesan Smith, P...I like the faerie line.<br /><br />Stephanie Suesan Smith, Ph.D.<br />http://stephaniesuesansmith.comStephanie Suesan Smith, Ph.D.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06258700735299993683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-15295189553891144592011-02-02T20:08:39.209-05:002011-02-02T20:08:39.209-05:00Hi Guys! I'm so glad you all stopped by!
Caro...Hi Guys! I'm so glad you all stopped by! <br />Caroline, Jill and Jordan - I like the faerie one because it opens a world of possible fantasy.<br />Clancy - Yup, stripping a man's shirt definitely gets reader's attention. Although I see Lilly's point about some older men, LOL!<br />Andris - I'm honored that I inspired your awesome blog! Loved it!Kat Duncanhttp://www.katduncan.net/writeabout/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-35970403921536925632011-02-02T19:18:42.667-05:002011-02-02T19:18:42.667-05:00Jill, JOrdan, and Andris, thanks for stopping by. ...Jill, JOrdan, and Andris, thanks for stopping by. And Andris, I loved your blog post today. You so have to guest on my blog this March.Lilly Gaylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12085355337721818824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-80141755946380269422011-02-02T19:16:32.880-05:002011-02-02T19:16:32.880-05:00I love the "Strip his shirt off." openin...I love the "Strip his shirt off." opening and the "It isn't possible to capture a faerie." I mean, what's not to love about a man's shirt coming off? Also, I love a fun fantasy so opening with a comment about a faerie gets my attention. That first line is so important. Thanks for the post. JordanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-78282468426380647132011-02-02T17:49:22.537-05:002011-02-02T17:49:22.537-05:00This blog is what prompted me to write about the P...This blog is what prompted me to write about the Paraprosdokian sentences this morning! I love a good one-liner because they have such impact!Cherokee Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14794636808277697930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-57559782014151107962011-02-02T17:13:23.774-05:002011-02-02T17:13:23.774-05:00Kat, love the line about faeries. I would read tha...Kat, love the line about faeries. I would read that story for sure.Jill Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10754506629717417267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-59068684629762767292011-02-02T17:09:10.751-05:002011-02-02T17:09:10.751-05:00Caroline, always a pleasure having you guest or vi...Caroline, always a pleasure having you guest or visit my blog. Thanks!Clancy, thanks for stopping by but I have to point out that some men really shouldn't strip off their shirts. lol! I adore James Garner, but he's pushing 80. I think I like him better dressed. lol! Now, Hugh Jackman, Gerard Butler...strip away baby!Lilly Gaylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12085355337721818824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-47282208009916457932011-02-02T13:38:41.183-05:002011-02-02T13:38:41.183-05:00Okay - I'm all over a man stripping off his sh...Okay - I'm all over a man stripping off his shirt! That's the one for me. I appreciate the examples as I work towards improving my own. Nice blog. ThanksClancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12470931492839670360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4715895375151487456.post-5192615010611073332011-02-02T13:00:43.408-05:002011-02-02T13:00:43.408-05:00Kat, you have some great first lines. I especially...Kat, you have some great first lines. I especially like the ones about catching a faerie and the gun.Caroline Clemmonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14914658854159456335noreply@blogger.com